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Saturday 18 November 2017

My Weekly Plenary Week 3..

This is my weekly plenary and we do this to improve our learning.

My Weekly Plenary week 5.

This is my weekly plenary.This is what we do for our weekly plenary we type about what we've learned and what we need to improve on and what we are proud of and what we need to keep learning on.

Friday 20 October 2017

This is the carpool karaoke for our assemble we had doing this.

Carpool karaoke


EXPOSITION WRITING TERM 4

EXPOSITION WRITING TERM 4




My Goals: 3 areas that I need to work on to improve my Exposition writing (from the rubric)
1. Ideas  
Use the correct constructor
Add more detail to my paragraph  
2.  Organisation  
Use the correct constructor
3. Sentence Structure  
Make sure my sentences makes scents


'Should all children get pocket money’


Planning: My reasons, why I agree or disagree ( you will pick only 3)
Teaches you the importance of working for your money.
Forget your lunch you can buy it.
Saving to start your adult life.





Writing
Title of your exposition
My Notes
My Writing
Orientation/Opening
-Start with a Rhetorical Question
-state your opinion
-give your 3 reasons why you think this
Yes all children should  get pocket money.  

1.Teaches you the importance of working for your money.
2.Forget your lunch you can buy it.

3.Saving to start your adult life.
Have you ever been paid for doing your chores? I have,but I think all children should get pocket money.Pocket money is a small amount of money that is given to a child for doing mahi around the house or like helping clean up other families mess.  

Firstly It teaches you the importance of working for your money.
Secondly If you forget your lunch you can buy it.

Finally you can Save to start your adult life.   

Point 1
Expand on your first reason. Why do you think this? Why is it important?

1.Teaches you the importance of working for your money.   
Expect to be given everything.
Feels good / have pride or mana when we work for something.
Firstly, it teaches you the importance of working for your money.If children are earning pocket money it will help them get a sense of what adult life is like because when you grow up you have to work to earn money to pay for everything in life.
Point 2
Expand on your second reason.

2.Forget your lunch you can buy it.
-In a rush and we forget
-You sleep in and don’t have time
- Early chores
Secondly,If children went to school and had no lunch they will be able to buy some with their pocket money they earned.   
Point 3
Expand on your third reason.

3.Saving to start your adult life.
-To help buy a house
-To travel
-Go to university
Finally, some children might start saving their pocket money for their futures to buy things like laptops, phones, cars or anything that they might want when they grow older.If children are earning pocket money it will help them get a sense of what adult life is like because when you grow up you have to work to earn money to pay for everything in life.@?;l`
Conclusion
Restate your opinion and why
You might recommend something for the reader to do or think. Why should they think the same as you?



Teacher feedback: (what do you want Mrs Henare and Mrs Cowles to focus on in your writing?)
I would like to please look at….

My Weekly Plenary week 1

Wednesday 26 July 2017

This is about should sun hat's be allowed at School and why should we have them at our school. Should sun hat's be allowed at School?


Do you want to get skin cancer? {No} because lately children are getting skin cancer and if you are on the beach you should put on some  sunscreen always you could get skin cancer and it’s not good for you?  


Firstly I believe: we should always wear hat’s when it’s hot and put on some sunscreen on to just incase we might get sun cancer or sun burnt.


Secondly  I believe: that we should all bring a drink bottle to school so you don’t need to wait in the hot sun just waiting  for a drink  after playing sports & you can bring your own drink to school?


Thirdly I believe: That we should wear hats when wear playing sports just to  be a healthy student & protecting our head from getting brain damage?

Lastly I believe: We should alway wear a hat outside and on a hot day and we should put some sunscreen on when it’s hot just incase we get skin cancer or sun burnt & we should always protecting our heads?

Wednesday 5 July 2017

Sewing Reflection...

This is our Technology That we did this year and I kinda of liked doing this but it was quite hard to sew because I'm not good at sewing and I didn't even know how to sew and now I do.


Friday 10 March 2017

Rubbish bins


Rubbish bins
I honestly  believe that we should have our rubbish bins back:

Firstly I agree with having our rubbish bins back because it stinks our  bag’s out and  if  you have fruit! It might make your bag sticky and  if you have fruit snacks or snacks  they will stick to our bags.           

Secondly  I disagree of getting  our rubbish  bins back  because some of us don’t even put our rubbish in our bag’s  they just chuck it in other people's bag’s or chuck it on the ground.

Thirdly I agree getting our rubbish bins back because our school is getting dirty and some people don’t   pick the rubbish that they drop they just leave it there and then other people have to pick it up and sometimes they don’t even pick any rubbish up they just run straight past it for other people.
Lastly I agree getting our rubbish bins back because it makes us do more work when we get home and our bag’s will be filed of rubbish and it would look yuck if you had fruit in your bag like a banana cause the skin will go rotten and that will be in your bag and your parents would not like that and it would be so yuck.