EXPOSITION WRITING TERM 4

EXPOSITION WRITING TERM 4

My Goals: 3 areas that I need to work on to improve my Exposition writing (from the rubric)

1. Ideas   Use the correct constructor Add more detail to my paragraph

2.  Organisation   Use the correct constructor

3. Sentence Structure   Make sure my sentences makes scents

'Should all children get pocket money’

Planning: My reasons, why I agree or disagree ( you will pick only 3)

Teaches you the importance of working for your money.	Forget your lunch you can buy it.	Saving to start your adult life.

Writing

Title of your exposition	My Notes	My Writing
Orientation/Opening -Start with a Rhetorical Question -state your opinion -give your 3 reasons why you think this	Yes all children should  get pocket money.   1.Teaches you the importance of working for your money. 2.Forget your lunch you can buy it. 3.Saving to start your adult life.	Have you ever been paid for doing your chores? I have,but I think all children should get pocket money.Pocket money is a small amount of money that is given to a child for doing mahi around the house or like helping clean up other families mess.   Firstly It teaches you the importance of working for your money. Secondly If you forget your lunch you can buy it. Finally you can Save to start your adult life.
Point 1 Expand on your first reason. Why do you think this? Why is it important?	1.Teaches you the importance of working for your money.    Expect to be given everything. Feels good / have pride or mana when we work for something.	Firstly, it teaches you the importance of working for your money.If children are earning pocket money it will help them get a sense of what adult life is like because when you grow up you have to work to earn money to pay for everything in life.
Point 2 Expand on your second reason.	2.Forget your lunch you can buy it. -In a rush and we forget -You sleep in and don’t have time - Early chores	Secondly,If children went to school and had no lunch they will be able to buy some with their pocket money they earned.
Point 3 Expand on your third reason.	3.Saving to start your adult life. -To help buy a house -To travel -Go to university	Finally, some children might start saving their pocket money for their futures to buy things like laptops, phones, cars or anything that they might want when they grow older.If children are earning pocket money it will help them get a sense of what adult life is like because when you grow up you have to work to earn money to pay for everything in life.@?;l`
Conclusion Restate your opinion and why You might recommend something for the reader to do or think. Why should they think the same as you?

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